W is for the W's
W is for the W's. Today, author Debbie LaCroix is joining us to talk about the W's. Julie, once again, has out done herself with her wickedly wicked illustration. Thanks Debbie and Julie!
I met Debbie through the 12x12in12 challenge (a picture book challenge hosted by Julie Hedlund). I also had the pleasure of following Debbie, as she won round after round in Ed DeCaria's March Madness, 2012 poetry competition, in which Debbie won second place. Congrats Debbie! Now on to the W's!
Do you know your W’s. W’s hold your creativity together like glue. Without them, your poem or story will fall apart.
What do you want to accomplish with this poem? Is it for fun? To teach a life lesson? To win an award? Know your WHAT.
Julie Rowan-Zoch graphic designer morphed by motherhood into super-volunteer, spun into a pre-pubbie cocoon, soon to emerge writer and illustrator of children’s books! To learn more about Julie check out her fabulous blog by clicking here or find her on Facebook by clicking here.
I met Debbie through the 12x12in12 challenge (a picture book challenge hosted by Julie Hedlund). I also had the pleasure of following Debbie, as she won round after round in Ed DeCaria's March Madness, 2012 poetry competition, in which Debbie won second place. Congrats Debbie! Now on to the W's!
Wicked Illustration by Julie Rowan-Zoch |
Do you know your W’s. W’s hold your creativity together like glue. Without them, your poem or story will fall apart.
What are your W’s?
W: Who
W: What
W: When
W: Where
W: Why
And most important…………………
W: Write
A wise teacher told me the W’s lead you to
the basics for your story. To write a
good story, you need to know:
Who your characters are.
Your main character is very important.
You need to know them inside and out, and you need to know their voice. Make
sure you interview them to know more about this character. But you also need to
know the other characters in your story. If they are involved, they need to
have a purpose.
What they are doing.
What
are your characters trying to accomplish in your poem or story. If you are not
writing about characters, what is the moral of the poem, or what imagery do you
want to construe to your audience.
When the story takes place (today, past,
future).
When does your
story take place? You need to if it’s set in the future, today, past or a made
up time. All elements of your story or poem need to match. For example, you
can’t be writing about the 1800’s and have the young princess get a phone call.
Where is the setting.
Where are your
main characters? Is the setting here, there, or nowhere? Where are they
travelling to?
Why is the character doing that.
Why is your
character acting in such a way that could get him run over by a car? Why is he
jumping into a freezing river? What is
his or her motivation. Why is the bird flying backwards? When stuck with
writing, ask yourself, “why?” If you don’t know, take a moment to figure it
out.
Once you have all the above, then it’s time
to write.It doesn’t
matter if you have your W’s, if you don’t do this. So the most important W, is Write! Write! Write! But “W” goes
even deeper than the basics. Let’s take
a closer look:
Who are you writing for?
You need to know your audience. If you are writing for children, you
will want to leave out any inappropriate language, imagery, or topics they
would not care to learn about. Writing about Wall Street would not be a great
poem for 2nd graders, unless it was about a street surrounded by a
wall.
During March Madness, poetry competition (www.thinkkidthink.com), I was given seed words that I had to
incorporate into my poems for children. Often my motivation on how to use this
word would dictate who I was writing for. My use of Jerky gave me a poem about learning to drive, which is an older
audience then Pummeled, which was
about stuffing toys into a closet.
What are you writing?
Not only what
is your story about, but what are you writing? What type of poem or story are
you working on? Do you want it to rhyme? Is it a sonnet? What is your
pattern and rhythm?
What do you want to accomplish with this poem? Is it for fun? To teach a life lesson? To win an award? Know your WHAT.
When is your deadline?
This can be a deadline for a contest, or a self-imposed deadline. But
you need to know when you will finish it by. For projects without a deadline,
be realistic and break it down into smaller goals. Write your date down so you
hold yourself accountable for finishing.
Where do you
write?
Do you have a writing center? I often get asked (especially by my
children’s friends who come over for the first time), where do you write? Create
a space where you can enter your mind comfortably and get it all down.
Why are you
writing this story or poem?
What is your inspiration? Why do you want to put
this on paper? Your why is your internal motivation. Without it, you have no
reason to write.
Challenge
--Using today's prompt "wicked" write a poem using the W's. Or
--Write a W poem on a topic of your choosing.
Resources
--5 W's Poem. Click here to get a worksheet and to see an example.
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Do you want to catch up or re-visit earlier poetry posts? Here are the most recent poetry posts:
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Debbie is the author of "It's Almost Time" by Kane Miller. When not writing, she sells kids books and volunteers in her community. She is the mom to two boys, two cats, a dog, and three hermit crabs.
To learn more about Debbie head over to her site @ www.debbielacroix.com
To learn more about Debbie head over to her site @ www.debbielacroix.com
Julie Rowan-Zoch graphic designer morphed by motherhood into super-volunteer, spun into a pre-pubbie cocoon, soon to emerge writer and illustrator of children’s books! To learn more about Julie check out her fabulous blog by clicking here or find her on Facebook by clicking here.
Thank you Debbie and Rena for the lesson on W's.
ReplyDeleteI was able to read a few of Debbie's impressive poems for that contest and was very inspired (but also intimidated) to try out this challenge.
Julie, your "Wicked" piece is fantastic!
I used Julie's illustration to write one:
DeleteAn aristocrat
Concealed his rat
In the morning to buy quiche
Tucked him snug in his hat
For it's taboo to walk him with a leash.
Haha. I love this. I can see this man walking down the streets of London with this rat tail poking out.
DeleteAlso you did a wonderful job of answering the W's!
DeleteGreat poem!
DeleteGlad you enjoyed March Madness. It was a great test for me. :-)
Thanks so much :)
DeleteThanks Rena and Debbie. This reminds me of the 4 P's from marketing. Debbie you did an amazing job in March Madness, it really was madness, well done! And Julie, that illo is awesome, my fave so far.
ReplyDeleteI love Julie's wicked picture!
DeleteThanks! :-)
DeleteGreat W's! I needed this lesson when I wrote my Nature poem, Rena...tee hee. Makes me want a do over. Great advice, Debbie! Your work in the March Madness contest was terrific! I hope you participate next year. Another great interview, Rena. Julie, I thought I recognized those eyes. Those are the vampire bunny's eyes!
ReplyDeleteYou can always rewrite your nature poem. :) I've been rewriting some of my poems.
DeleteHope the W's help you in future poems. :-D Thanks for your compliment. It was a blast.
DeleteTrickery
ReplyDeleteBlack hat
Mute growl
Thinly veiled scowl
Landlord has come to evict (it's not due)
Note signed:
Martyr
"Minister's daughter!"
"His motives aren't hard to predict!" (what to do)
Wicked
Evil
Sinister weevil
She's placed on the train track and tied
Offer...
Rescind__
"Surrender!" He grinned.
"But first, you must become my bride!"
White gown
Pale face
Thinly veil lace
Landlord purses lips, then they're licked. (I do)
Then shock
surprise
Wi-i-ining disguise
Landlord then discovers he's tricked ("Not you!")
"Your specs, sir?"
"Offend, sir!"
"but look how it's penned, sir."
Landlord reads the note, yet again.
To his horrored chagrin
He read "r," not an "n."
Signed not by Martyr but Martyn-n-n!
Haha. I like the bits in the brackets. Your poem is pleasing to the eye and the ear and made me laugh!
DeleteOh, thanks for that, Rena!
DeleteVery, very nice, Pam. I love the story. It's so creative and has a fun twist.
ReplyDeleteI'm just making it over here for comments...busy day!!! Thanks, Debbie for all your thoughts. You did so well in the March Madness (congrats:-) that it is nice to hear from you. Thanks!!!
ReplyDeleteHere is my post...Thanks for the inspiration Julie & Rena!
http://wp.me/p22d5X-hY
Thanks Penny. March Madness was so much fun.
DeleteWonderful words of wisdom, Debbie - thanks! Here's a link to my 'W' poem: http://loridegman.blogspot.com/2012/04/poetry-month-mash-up-day-twenty-three.html
ReplyDeleteGreat W post. I think the why gets lost sometimes with all the chatter going on in the internet. Thanks ladies.
ReplyDeleteI agree! Thanks for stopping by.
DeleteThanks for the great interview Rena and Debbie! I am playing catch-up today and just about to hit up a very WICKED poem! ;)
ReplyDeleteI can't wait to read it!
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