P is for Prose
By Rena J. Traxel |
What is a prose
poem? Prose poems lack line breaks, but
“maintains a poetic quality, often utilizing techniques common to poetry, such
as fragmentation, compression, repetition, and rhyme. The prose poem can range
in length from a few lines to several pages long, and it may explore a
limitless array of styles and subjects” (http://poets.org).
Here is a prose poem
I wrote about a month ago as part of exercise for class. Writing in this form
is not something I like. I think line breaks are a lot of fun so I re-wrote the
poem using lines breaks.
Raggedy Ann:
red hair, painted nose, smiling face, open eyes. She’s dressed in
old-fashioned handmade clothes — dress, apron, pantaloons. I picked her from a
garbage dump, brought her home, cleaned her up. She’s perched on a shelf above
my desk. Watching over me. A child’s toy. A toy I never had.
Raggedy Ann
Perched on
shelf above my desk–
red hair,
painted nose,
smiling face,
open
eyes.
She’s dressed
in old-fashioned handmade clothes–
dress,
apron,
pantaloons.
I picked her
from a garbage dump–
brought her
home
cleaned
her up.
Perched on
shelf above my desk–
A child’s toy.
A toy I never
had.
Do you see the
difference? They both sound the same, but do not look the same. The second poem would be considered free verse. I prefer line breaks, but I also prefer to use punctuation in my
poems. These are choices every poet must make. If a prose poem is to be seen on the page, I would recommend using punctuation or risk having a poem that looks like one long run on sentence.
Challenge
--Today I want
you to play with form (think about lines breaks and punctuation). Try writing a
prose poem using a photo that inspires you. Or
--Use my photo
of Raggedy and write a poem.
Resources
Rena I'm really confused between free verse and prose poems. With your line breaks is yours free verse? I look forward to doing this one when I'm back home.
ReplyDeleteThe second poem isn't a prose poem. I was just showing what happens to a poem when line breaks are introduced.
DeleteI have mine up and I have to admit...I strayed today. See post:
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Thanks, Rena!!!!
No big deal. I just wanted participants to play around with form today.
DeleteI had a go, it sounds just like a short story lol. You are really stretching us Rena, thanks so much!
ReplyDeletehttp://catherinemjohnson.wordpress.com/2012/04/18/p-is-for-prose/
I find the same thing with some prose poems.
DeleteThanks for the lesson today Rena!!
ReplyDeleteHere's mine:
My Way
I'm on my way, down a road. Exactly where I want to go. It's over the hill. It's through the woods. I skip, I run, but mainly I walk. Maybe it's to nowhere. Though, I sure do have fun. It clears my head. It sparks some thoughts-
Will I find the way? Will the end up happy? I walk and I wish. My feet move fast, slow. I'm on my way down a road.
Towards...the unknown.
I love this, Jennifer! I love the way it speeds up, then slows down. Even after it slows at the end, there's still heavy breathing for the excitement of the unknown (or the mystery).
DeleteThank you so much Pam! :)
DeleteI totally missed this golden nugget. Love it!
DeleteI totally missed this golden nugget. Love it!
DeleteInteresting, I will have to spend more time with this one and catch up later!
ReplyDeleteThanks Julie. I'm looking forward to it.
DeleteRena, you're making us work today. I love it, though. I've researched and read about prose a lot today. I still don't think I quite understand. However, I'm gonna give it a try.
ReplyDeleteI'm looking forward to it!
DeleteThe difference is subtle, but definitely noticable. Thanks for sharing!
ReplyDeleteThanks for stopping by Sherry!
DeleteProse that sounds poetic...so beautiful!
ReplyDeleteProse does have a wonderful ring to it.
DeleteLast month I attended a poetry open mic. I was the only one with a poem that rhymed. Prose is in!
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Kate
http://solidhappiness.blogspot.com/
Neat and good to know. I'll be sure to stop by your blog.
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