V is for Video
Vampire Rabbit Illustration by Julie Rowan-Zoch |
I met Renee through the 12x12in12 challenge (a picture book writing challenge hosted by Julie Hedlund). Being relatively new to writing children's poetry I was thrilled when I came across her blog, No Water River. Her blog is full of fun poems for kids and the best part each poem is accompanied by a video. She is going to share one of her fabulous poems today minus the video. But don't fret you can head over to her blog and watch many of her fun videos.
Renee, why do you write poetry?
Mainly because it’s fun! I have always loved words
and wordplay, so I get a kick out of putting together sounds and syllables and
arranging them just so, so they are fun to read and dance to. At least, that’s
the aim. Whether I succeed all the time is a whole ‘nother question. (Sometimes,
though, writing isn’t fun at all – it’s even a torture for me. In those cases,
I agree with my pal Dorothy Parker: “I hate writing; I love having written.”)
What kind of poetry do you write?
I write children’s poetry, probably aimed toward the
younger set and pretty much always in rhyme. I especially like to create weird
little characters and write poems about them that are little stories in
themselves. I didn’t start with children’s poetry, though. Back in the day, I
was all about adult poetry in free verse, but it turns out that’s not where I
should be hanging out (I mean…really).
I do plan on playing with free verse and different forms in my kids’ poems,
though.
What inspires you to write poetry?
Absurdity. I love absurd happenings and humor,
twisted looks at normal things, the possibilities of “What if…?” Plain old
silliness/being silly inspires me. Penguins. And my husband, who is also a
literary type and a master at wordplay in Italian. Not only is he my
brainstorming partner, but he also has a little hobby of thinking up book and
poem titles that are often so funny or bizarre or thought-provoking that they make
me wonder “Now what would that
book/poem be about?” In fact, the name of my blog No Water River came from one
of his titles in Italian (Il Fiume
Senz’acqua).
Who is your favourite poet? Why?
I don’t have a favorite anything because my tastes
are so varied. I might adore one poem or book by an author, but detest every
other word that author has ever set on paper. What can I say, I’m fickle! My
favorite tends to be whoever I happen to be reading at the moment. Right now
that person is Amy Ludwig VanDerwater,
who is brand new to me and whose poetry I have just fallen in love with. At
other moments in my life it has been Sylvia Plath, Adrienne Rich, and every
other great female poet, and of course I love and admire Dorothy Parker for her
wit and humor – her poetry is a bit morose, but she kills with her one-liners! For
the guys, I like Robert Frost, William Carlos Williams, and Billy Collins for
their gifts of observation and beautiful writing that is accessible to all.
What is your favourite poem? Why?
See above! Oh, all right, let’s see if I can name one
or two. Since I am a theatrical type who prefers her poetry read out loud, I am
drawn to poems with juicy words or emotions or characters. That’s why I like
Plath’s “Daddy,” Coleridge’s “The Rime of the Ancient Mariner,” (as I wrote about on Katie Davis’s
blog), Carroll’s “Jabberwocky,” anything by Shakespeare, Whitman’s “O
Captain! My Captain,” and Dr. Seuss’s “The Grinch Who Stole Christmas.” Told
you my tastes run the gamut!
A piece of advice you would like to share with your fellow
poets?
As I’ve written elsewhere…get
on your feet during the writing process! Say the words at full voice, not under
your breath – but be wary of falling into the same speech rhythm over and over.
To avoid that, pick a different imaginary audience to read to each time (your
peers at a café, bigwigs at an awards ceremony, kids in the park, a group of
attentive penguins) and in different situations (a rap concert, a church, the
middle of an Oscar Wilde play). I swear, nothing helps me hear the hiccups more
in the early stages of writing than getting out of the chair and giving voice
to the words. Later, of course, it’s a good idea to give it to other people to
read aloud – they won’t have your rhythm already in their heads, so you’ll get
a “truer” reading and hear what doesn’t work.
Why do you create video poetry?
I simply believe that poetry is a living thing that’s
meant to be heard and savored orally and aurally, not just dissected on paper
and left there with its guts hanging out. I am especially adamant about this
when it comes to sharing any
literature with kids – whether it’s a poem or Huck Finn – because, for me, appreciation (of language, story, character,
and craft) must come first. In fact, I’m pretty sure that “formal text
analysis” happens naturally if you just let kids live the literature and get excited about it – I mean, who wants to
analyze something she doesn’t first feel in her bones or heart? [Off soapbox,
exit stage right]
So yeah…I do poetry videos
because I want kids to see that poetry is alive and fun and not scary and
waiting to be slurped up with a straw.
Can you share a tip or two about making poetry videos
or reading poems out loud?
Sure! When you’re making a video or just
reading a poem aloud, the most important thing is to make sure your audience
can understand what you’re saying! That means using good diction and being
aware of voice production, which takes practice. The goal is to avoid speaking
from your throat by centering your voice on your front palate and supporting it
with good breathing technique. Like I said, this takes practice, but quickly
becomes second nature. Good vocal production will give your voice a pleasing
resonance and prevent you from “swallowing” your words or losing the ends of
sentences in your throat.
Another tip comes from the
oral interpretation unit of the public speaking course I taught, and that is to
go through the poem many times, marking up the “script” in whatever way makes
sense to you. I use musical notation, or a system of underscores, circles, slashes,
and highlights to mark pacing, pauses, emphasis, loudness/softness, gesture,
movement, and so on. This is called “scoring the script” (as an actor might do
with a play script) and will be your roadmap to a layered reading.
Of course, these are just
quickie tips. Anyone interested in learning more will find lots of info just by
searching the terms “basic vocal production,” “oral interpretation,” and “scoring
the script.”
Any recent publications and/or accomplishments you would like to share with us?
I’m currently sharing my
poetry on my blog at No Water River,
via print and video, and am working on pieces for submission. In the meantime,
I am thrilled to continue writing poems and stories for the early readers
published by All About Learning
Press. It was for AALP that I wrote and recorded 42 kids’ poems for the book
Lizard Lou: a
collection of rhymes old and new – and what a “frabjous” project that
was!
I've said this before and I'll say it again. Renee, I would have loved to have had you as a teacher! Thanks for coming on my blog today. Now a poem by Renee.
(“Ugly Pants” by Renée
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Ugly Pants from Lizard Lou |
Ugly Pants
I have a pair of ugly pants
with rips around the knees.
They have pink stripes and polka-dots
and smell like moldy cheese.
I have a pair of ugly pants
with rips around the knees.
They have pink stripes and polka-dots
and smell like moldy cheese.
They’re made of fleece and burlap,
and they’re weird and warm and snuggly.
If I wore them to a costume ball,
I’d win the prize for ugly.
I wear them every weekend,
though the other kids may tease,
but I just love my ugly pants
for climbing in the trees.
I know I shouldn’t boast or brag,
but I can say this smugly:
no one has a pair of pants
so perfectly, beautifully ugly!
Challenge
--Since poetry is meant to be performed when you write your poem today, I want you to perform it. No, you don't have to create a video, but try performing your poem in front of your kids, spouse, or a trusted friend! Try writing a poem about something that is absurd like a vampire rabbit! Or
--Use today's word "vampire" to write a poem.
--Use today's word "vampire" to write a poem.
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Do you want to catch up or re-visit earlier poetry posts? Here are the most recent poetry posts:
- U is for Universal: Writing poetry using universal themes.
- T is for Twitter: All about Twitter poetry.
- S is for Sonnet: How to write a sonnet. Plus interview with writer and poet Linda J. Pedley.
A former English/theater/communications teacher and wannabe starlet, Renée is the editor at All About Learning Press and a children’s writer. She also blogs on language and grammar at AALP (often under the guise of her alter ego, the Chipmunk of Doom), and composes silly poems for her own blog No Water River. Renée holds a BFA in acting/directing from Marymount Manhattan College, an MA in English Education from New York University, and a Ph.D. in…oh, wait, no, that’s it.
Julie Rowan-Zoch graphic designer morphed by motherhood into super-volunteer, spun into a pre-pubbie cocoon, soon to emerge writer and illustrator of children’s books! To learn more about Julie check out her fabulous blog by clicking here or find her on Facebook by clicking here. Stay tuned to see more illustrations from Julie.
Oh! Soooo much fun. Talent just oozes out of you, Renee. You are so articulate and so silly at the same time. It's an endearing combination! Can anyone tell I'm a Renee fan???? I think No Water River is a generous gift that all educators should be using in their classroom.
ReplyDeleteStart the day with Renee! (a little rhyme in itself)
I really appreciate all the advice you have given today about performing your poem...which scares the ugly pants off of me. And speaking of ugly pants, which are meant to be kept on, your poem is your usual brilliant! Any kid who thinks they don't like poetry only needs to find your website.
Ok....I'm through gushing about your talents. Keep writing!
Rena...thanks for the A to Z Challenge...love it!
Aw, Penny, thank you so much for the gushing! You made my day! Don't be a-skeared of saying your poems out loud - you will be fabulous, darling, because you have great material to work with!
DeleteThanks Penny and I agree with you 100%!
DeleteCan somebody please buy the lady some PENGUINS already? heehee :) Loved the interview!
ReplyDeleteThose were just for you, my dear! :)
DeleteHaha!
DeleteRena, thanks so much for having me on your blog today. I must say I had a lot of fun answering your questions!
ReplyDeleteAnd although I was not able to keep up with the challenge, I've been stopping in every day to see what y'all are up to, and it's been inspiring!
Thanks Renee! I appreciate you coming on my blog today.
DeleteNatalie beat me to the punch...I was already googling Italian zoos to find the most attentive penguins available for the next installment at NWR.
ReplyDeleteRenee, we are all going to be boasting one day "I knew her when..."
A penguin poem is in the works...as soon as my creativity comes back. Total slump!
DeleteYeah...I knew her when she was just like she is now, haha!
Wow you've got your finger in many pies Renee, a great champion of words who gives so much of your time to help other writers and that poem is lovely.
ReplyDeleteMaybe that's why I gained so much weight...too much pie! Thank you, Catherine!
DeleteGreat interview! Renee, your video poetry project is a breath of fresh air. I love your message about poetry being read aloud and shared. It's so simple, and yet so easy to forget as we sit hunched at our computers... Please keep reminding us!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Carrie! Now go share a poem (if even with yourself, aloud)!
DeleteThanks ladies! Rena this poetry ride has been so much fun!
ReplyDeleteSublime rhymin' Renee - tastes good slurped with a straw!
Excellent energy boosting advice: 'get on your feet' and 'start the day with Renee'!
Thanks, Julie - and nice job on the evil vampire bunny! I love the clean lines you use. :)
DeleteThanks Julie!
DeleteI enjoyed the interview ladies. Renee, loved your answer on what inspires you to write poems :)
ReplyDeletePenguins! That's all I'm sayin'!
DeleteLove the poem and the interview and Penny is right, you are a great combo- articulate and silly!
ReplyDeleteI think we share these traits, Iza! :)
DeleteYou ladies are all inspiring me to jump into the deep end! I'm working on a found poem this afternoon during nap time. Fun!
ReplyDeleteOoh, fun! I recently did one with lines I stole off Twitter, and I love how it came out!
DeleteI hope you share it with us!
DeleteAwesome interview, Renee! I love No Water River - the content and the title! Thanks so much to the two R's!
ReplyDeleteRenee's blog is awesome.
DeleteThank you, Lori!! We need to talk about you + NWR one of these days!
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Julie your artwork is great! I think I could readily identify some of your work. Renee, what can I say. You are a master at what you do and this was a great interview! I'm with everyone else about the advice you've given. Useful, common sense stuff that we don't ordinarily think of. By the way, who doesn't own a pair of ugly pants? Good one, ladies!
ReplyDeleteI'm sure I have pictures somewhere proving I own a pair of ugly pants!
DeleteThank you, Pam. I will never forget the two plaid "suits" my mom sewed for me when I was about ten -- one green, one purple, matching jacket and pants. I loved those suits!
DeleteYikes! Haha.
DeleteHappy birthday Renee! And great interview. I don't think I have a pair of pants that can compete with your ugly pants, but I do have plenty with holes. What a delightful poem!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Hannah! But your kids must have plenty of ugly pants by now -- I know mine do!
DeleteSo finally, my vampire poem:
ReplyDeleteDark Shadows Returns
In shadowy hamlet of Collinswood
where otherworldly spectrals stood
vigil o’er the coffin__ of Barnabas,
Is the wraithlike enchantress, Angelique.
Tortuous love, tenuous, weak
proved fatal for the soul__ of Barnabas.
Necromancer with a Temptress’ wile
felt betrayed and so did beguile
the former mortal known__as Barnabus.
Her schemes to contrive, and conjure desire
drew only contempt, scorn and ire.
Now cursed, his nights are long and ponderous
Roaming Collinswood as the Vampire__Barnabas
Renee! "Ugly Pants" cracked me up! It was such a treat to read all about YOU, you who spends your time so generously snickerviewing others and listening so graciously. Thank you for the good reading advice (which I'll definitely share) and for your very kind words here. I've never been a favorite poet before, and to be yours for an hour or a week is an honor. Happiest of birthdays! xo, a.
ReplyDeleteThanks Amy.
DeleteHa! "I've never been a favorite poet before..." Love that line! And you'll be a favorite much longer than just a week, I'm sure. Thanks for the daily inspiration!
DeleteThank you, Rena and Renee! (Hey - that's fun to say together.) I'm finally catching up on a few great posts I missed this past week. What a terrific feature here! Renee, I'm kinda wishing you were a little closer to the states. Or maybe I'll finally make it to Italy someday? Thanks for sharing such great insight and tips. Oh, and I've been writing about penguins this morning for a little nonfiction project. I'll definitely try reading my next poem to an imaginary colony of them!
ReplyDeletePenguins! How I love them. Actually, I kind of wish all of you were closer to Italy! Thanks for your kind words, Robyn!
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